Shot Down
Posted May 2nd, 2009 at 08:21 AM by djtwiss
I only lied to myself
When I said that
I would resist you
While my head said no
My lips just wanted to kiss you
And even when I wasn't near you
I could still feel and hear you
At night I even feared to
Lie down in my bed
Because I just might appear to
Be speaking your name even in my sleep
I tried so hard to ignore you
To pretend that I didn't even like you
But no matter how hard I tried to
You got under my skin and inside my head
Whether I was on my job or lying in my bed
Whether I was fast asleep or totaly awake
You controlled mt thoughts
Not much more could I take
"Ok." I said, in complete defeat
"I'm yours do with me whatever you want to."
With that superior air that is your alone
You looked at me and said
"What makes you think that I want you?" .........\
When I said that
I would resist you
While my head said no
My lips just wanted to kiss you
And even when I wasn't near you
I could still feel and hear you
At night I even feared to
Lie down in my bed
Because I just might appear to
Be speaking your name even in my sleep
I tried so hard to ignore you
To pretend that I didn't even like you
But no matter how hard I tried to
You got under my skin and inside my head
Whether I was on my job or lying in my bed
Whether I was fast asleep or totaly awake
You controlled mt thoughts
Not much more could I take
"Ok." I said, in complete defeat
"I'm yours do with me whatever you want to."
With that superior air that is your alone
You looked at me and said
"What makes you think that I want you?" .........\
Total Comments 4
Comments
 |  Ouch! That one hurt! Loved the flow in this poem and I can definitely relate to the subject at hand! I think I've said it before in the poetry post...you are an awesome writer!!! |
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| |  Wow, I can sense the tension, hesitation and finally giving in and putting your heart out there ....great job, but brutal ending! So sad ...but never live life with regrets |
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| |  shes fakin, dont give up yet! lol shes just playin hard to get! |
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| |  Rejection of the heart can be understood universally. To put yourself out there and be completely vulnerable to another...all to be crushed is awful. Hopefully, in the end, we become stronger. Any woman whom can not appreciate a man willing to put his feelings into words to share with others....may not be ready or deserving of the intent behind the words.  Love the poem. |
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